Saturday, 21 March 2015

Poem: If only I couldn't die

If only I couldn’t die.
If only I couldn’t die I would try and fly.
I would glide in the sky forever.
I would jump out of a plane and land in the lanes of a pool.
I would climb the sky tower, with no gear and the crowd at the bottom would cheer.
Then I would jump and land on a camels hump.
I would fall asleep and dream I could leap as far as a cheetah.

By Zylah
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5 comments:

  1. Anonymous22 March 2015 at 16:22

    hi,Zylah I like your poem about you couldn't die because all of the things you can survive
    by Arthur

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  2. Anonymous22 March 2015 at 16:29

    that was amazing you used lots of describing words good job by pete room 10

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  3. Room1022 March 2015 at 16:49

    Hi Zylah,
    That was amazing great adjectives.
    If only If only

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  4. Anonymous23 March 2015 at 14:52

    Hi Zylah,
    I love your poem, I love all of those things. [but I would be too scared to jump
    off the sky-tower!]
    from Kassidy =D

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  5. Sally24 March 2015 at 20:44

    HI Zylah, wow that is a cool poem! I like the idea of landing on a camel's hump! Being able to do anything you want without fear of dying is a really interesting subject. I would swim with sharks and try to cuddle a tiger!

    From Mum

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